Hey good work i enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.

Thought-provoking.

Very straightforward. imagery doesn't do it for me...but that's the style anyways. Quaint topic. Pardon me, I don't mean to insult, but this piece seems more like...a diary entry that a poem. The format is somewhat lacking. I think that I would appreciate this more under fiction. Some of hte metaphors are really clever.

'Likewise to some souls who always undermining their self . . . contemplating won’t do anything

To think this was something out of a horror novel . . . why didn’t I notice?'

Interesting. I liked it, really, for all that I said, I did.

wow...i'm...I know this...i'm going through this right now. Its nice to know others understand