|Reviews for memory|
| loversdream17 10/25/07 . chapter 1
Hey good work i enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/14/06 . chapter 1
| method acting 7/14/06 . chapter 1
Very straightforward. imagery doesn't do it for me...but that's the style anyways. Quaint topic. Pardon me, I don't mean to insult, but this piece seems more like...a diary entry that a poem. The format is somewhat lacking. I think that I would appreciate this more under fiction. Some of hte metaphors are really clever.
'Likewise to some souls who always undermining their self . . . contemplating won’t do anything
To think this was something out of a horror novel . . . why didn’t I notice?'
Interesting. I liked it, really, for all that I said, I did.
| Shattered Heart a Broken Dream 9/24/05 . chapter 1
wow...i'm...I know this...i'm going through this right now. Its nice to know others understand