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Reviews For: Guilt

lovelikeamixtape 2005-09-24 ch 1,	such a good definition of guilt. the title fits so perfectly. you did an amazing job of putting this into words.
PessimisticOptimism 2005-09-22 ch 1,	It's beautiful...you're an awesome by the way. Thank you for the criticism. that was basically what I was looking for when I posted the first chapter.
mizu no kokoro 2005-09-21 ch 1,	wow... i love the intensity of the imagery and the raw sense of emotion~ Great job! keep writing!
lackluster 2005-09-19 ch 1,	so vivid! it's beauty at it's ugliest, which is conveyed so well. i love it.
smile persephone 2005-09-17 ch 1,	"Sweat-drenched hair curling like a/Renaissance painting" - I love the imagery of this, such a lovely simile. The imagery of it all, actually, is beautiful. Nicely done.