This is brilliant. Well done mate, it's absolutely fantastic poem. I feel lucky just to have read it. Fantastic work - TheDJ.

This was really effective and wonderful. I love the way you write, the repetition was used really well and added immensely to the whole thing, emphasising just the right points. Keep writing!

Oh, wow. Awesome. It's described so well, I could see it happening in my mind. :-)

Randi

That poem was genius. You honestly touched me right inside. Learn this, the greatest compliment you can get from me is "I wish I wrote that", and that's how I feel. God bless you and never stop writing.

Loved that. the repetition was well used, and not in a way that it felt like a template was placed down and filled in for each section. good work. mariah

Loved that. the repetition was well used, and not in a way that it felt like a template was placed down and filled in for each section. good work. mariah

i love your writing...end of story

this was beautiful, pain and heartbreak, acceptance and loss.

i liked this poem alot. keep it up

Wow, this is really powerful. I don't really know what else to say other then that.

I like the repitition, it lulls me, makes me sink into the poems and see every moment you describe, and creates a seemingly unanimous divide in my mind where my own imaginings and your words blend, and I feel as if I understand your emotions when I've never experienced this.

wow.. i.. wow.

i absolutely love this, keep it up!