hey you! awsome writing! Its the best u've written! really!! I love the way you write ! its amazing!! keep up writing stuff like this!! wow!! I don't have the words to express myself!! awsome!!I love u!!

Wow! This piece has stolen my breath. It is so beautiful, powerful, and excellently written. Wonderful job.

wonderful stuff

would be an awesoem song!

lol

*Pam is going through a shock attack... wide eyes... heart beating...* Wow... awesome!! I think this is one of your best works. Guess that's all I can say, I think you've grown as a writer. I wanted to keep on drowning too... hey! thanx! now I think I understand the lyrics from MCR's Drowning Lessons!! Woohoo!!LovePampire

wow...that was great

Nice imagery, overall wondeful stuff. keep writing and stay strong. all my love, shadowed mind

I love it!

I have to ask, did you get the inspiration for the title from AFI's CD "The Art of Drowning" or is it just a coincidence?