update! I'M GOING INSANE please!! :(

So...apparently everyone has a life but me.-megan

I love this story...update soon!

This is amazing! You are my favorite. This is the same as if I'd gone to the library or barnes and noble. No other fantasy can compare, and i have read many. Please update soon!

I find this story to be most intriguing please update soon

Sweet! This story Rules! Update!

this is amazing as always...don't ever get disheartened we all love your work...I dont like the part where jill lists off names of people she knows...When the names have no faces or history to them they're meaningless...if someone listed off a bunch of names to you that held no importance would you care of belive them? But besides that sentence I love it!! I know this stuff takes time for you to come up with and I dont want you to rush because the quality of your work is wonderful, but if there's anyway you could update faster I would really appreciate it. Waiting to read your next installment kills me!

ARRaarrg arg arg! Update!

so when are you getting published?

love it. love it. love it.especially the ** joke. beautiful writing. you MUST continue. and the stories are starting to connect. i'm excited!

So..this is getting pretty sweet...glad jill didnt have sex with that guy...update soon please!!

Ok so this one was pretty cool but my fave storyline is still lillith please get back to them!

Jericho and Lilith converse with one another as if they were equals not as if they had a father-daughter realtionship, which is confusng when you mention that he raised her. Also, the occupation you place Jericho in doesn't really command a form of respect. A guard on the outskirts of the land that has to endure the people the Minwas hate and the harshness of winter doesn't exactly depict a man held in high esteem by his peers, maybe think about another job for him, but I really like the setting and the story line, the baths are pretty cool. I enjoy all of your ideas, your imagination is crazy, I wish I lived in one of the worlds inside your head.

I enjoyed reading this, the ideas are interesting and origanal. I don't know why peter and toby need to be brother and sister...i thought the love scene was beautiful but tainted by that fact. Like I said the concepts are pretty cool but it seems you lack a voice, also there was no real plot...You introduced a number of problems but the conclusion of your story which was more of a denaument, didn't address or solve any of them. Get someone to help you organize your ideas and this could be a very good piece.

That was simply AMAZING! I love it! I'm so very glad that you updated! Please continue to write!