I really like the title of this and the way you did the bolds and italics. This is really sad but I'm glad that both girls walk out of the boy's life in the end. Good for them. (:

Good job!

Wow, this was well written. But i'm curious, is the based on a true story?

great job on the poem :)

These are so cool.

Juliet.

wow... this was interestingly done! different! and sad too because they'res no way for the three of them to be happy... just like in real life...

very good, i love it!

Wow, the boldness and italics really work in this poem! _ It's not so confusing then! Good on you! Great poem, impressive! Keep writing!

Anna