Interesting story...

The punctuation for the dialogue is a little annoying because it keeps ending in a full stop when it's supposed to have a comma, instead.

The first attacker was funny; he sounded like a deranged droid!

"She floats up in the air and a brilliant light erupts from her body expelling the two men who had attacked her. She lands back on the ground passed out."

It should be "repelled" instead of "expelled", but generally, it is looks good, only a little confusing with the sudden introduction of so many people near the end.

Also, why did you start off with that lone past tense, but then changed everything else to present tense?

this is very interesting. keep writing :)