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Reviews For: Haunting to be Wanted
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle 2005-09-17 . chapter 1
'Scratching and crawling'

sang in my head/ rang from

"Like The Way I Do".

But I hear things. All the time.
lioness2004 2005-09-17 . chapter 1
I like your writing style. Keep up the great work.
Lauren Raven 2005-09-17 . chapter 1
This is a great piece of imagery, but I'm not entirely sure what it's saying emotionally. It's well-written and the imagery is beautiful, but to me it seems to lack focus and intensity. Good job otherwise, however; keep writing.
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