keep writing Lucretia!

Values are only pretenses. They are like prayers. They do nothing.

wow! Good job! I liked it a writing!

This gives away the fact that there definately ARE worms underneath the surface. On the surface, its very provocative, and furthermore, "Is it wrong to be evil if your grammar is flawless?"? Far more than anything I could imagine. Beautiful work, Lucretia.

No, if your grammar is flawless then it is NOT wrong to be evil.

Wow..harsh..I'd love to know the story behind this one. You carry so much emotion, it just draws you in but at the same time there's so much hatred, it makes you wonder if you want to really be 'in'. I love you. You've definetly got a lot of talent. _

i really like the use of italics and repetition - good work :)

Nice work, really nice. Keep writing! _

Anna