Wow... I... am dumbfounded. This is a truly great story, and I cannot wait to see where it will go.

Write on and write well! (Salutes.)

Ps. 'Alder' is spelled exactly like the Danish word for 'age'. Amusing, no?

I really like this story. I don't exactly know where you're going with it but I like it all the same.

Great characters, great descriptions, great story. Keep it up.

So... he got drunk and tried something on Cat. Naughty. I like Cat's "bro"/ bodygaurd. He seems a little dry though. Is he supposed to be that way?

I really love your story. The Lonely God is so misunderstood. It's great, and I'm glad to see an update.

I really like this so far! Great job and I hope to read more soon.

Cool. keep it up!

cool. Keep up the good work. Spring Lakes... sounds familiar(?) ...you never lived there, so why...? Nvm. L8R. ^_^

Ooh!...so what happens next? I like this story...And I can't wait to see what will happen now.

Is that a real name? Meshkori(?)? Who is Moeb really? Is he a mage? Is he an elf? Does he really like Cat or is he just using her as an escape? Does Klaten ever findout who Cat really is? Just prompting, but I really want to know! ^_^

How am I supposed to know? You pick the one that is the closest. Btw, nice chappie. ^_^

Oh! I know! His wife got sent to another world or she happened to be under a curse and died after something happened, or she is the daughter of nobility, or she is some super-natural being. Am I right?

Keep up the good work! ^_^ Did his wife get killed by him accedintaly? Or was she killed by a Torr soilder?

Feels a lil like an Alice in Wonderland story. Love your writing style, way smooth! Keep it up and goin! =)

Hey you! Long time no chat. Gr! Stupid projects. I have so many due, it's not funny. I need another, longer vacation. I'll talk to you later. I have more homework to do. GR. TTYL! ^_^ P.S. You scared me with all of the new stuff. What happened? The stories are gone. Well, some of them. This new one is pretty cool!