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abstractelysium 2006-05-14 . chapter 1
Amazing. Relevant. Powerful.

You never cease to astound and awe. Lovely!

abstractelysium
a lonely september 2006-03-27 . chapter 2
wow. . . i really dont know what to say, but that was very good. . .
classic violet 2006-02-27 . chapter 2
Amazing. Keep going! I love this.
classic violet 2006-02-27 . chapter 1
simply beautiful. so gorgeous.
dollface and her cancer 2005-12-01 . chapter 1
Oddly captivating.

What else can I say? You've convinced me to sit here, in the dead of winter, and think about what a firefly's light would sound like. That, my friend, is the mark of an incredibly good poem.
do not resuscitate 2005-09-26 . chapter 2
beautiful. perhaps beyond beautiful. i love the images & the choppy abstraction.
Faithless Juliet 2005-09-17 . chapter 2
This is so abstract and fascinating I don't know how to begin to form my thoughts about it.

Much love,Juliet.
Faithless Juliet 2005-09-17 . chapter 1
“we blink in meter; they blink in pulsesand it is harmoniously ugly” This is amazing, I love it, we blink in poetry while everyone else blinks to breathe. Our breath is birtehd from poetry.

Much love,Juliet.
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