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Reviews For: Bitter Chocolate

braindead1345
2006-04-20
ch 1,
abuseBeauftifil... bitter, i think this is what was missing from your other poem, this leaves me full... i know what im saying probley dosnt make since, but...anyways, awesome poem,bitter and esqiuse
chibicherrychan
2005-12-20
ch 1,
abuseThat's an interesting way of looking at life. Nice comparisson and unfortunately quite accurate, I believe. People do suck out everything that matters from the people around. It's sad, but everyone is so scared of being left empty themselves that they'll sooner swallow the others than allow themselves to be declared empty.
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