Holy shit. I loved every second of this piece. It's loaded with meaning, and the form of it just works. I have nothing bur praise for this piece. Favoriting. Keep writing! :)

Wonderful mismatching of words and continuation of thoughts.

huhs. why are all your poems so DEEP? T-T its a breathtaking read no doubt and at least i can understand this BUT. IM IN AWE. the more i read this poem, the faster it went, till i was practically zooming over the words toward the end. geehs! howd you write stuff like that

Beautiful. I love the way you use your words and have the whole meaning behind it, but still pushing it forward. And the format just adds the finishing touches.

Wish I could write like you. ;P

I love your voice. It's so natural.

Oh, my God. (The irony, no?)

Wonderful, wonderful. Strikingly cynical, apathetic in a sense, yet passionate in another; very nice.

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wow! that was pretty awesome! even though it mentions god alot... i still like it...oh yes, and thank you for the review. even though it wasn't that constructive, it did help me think of how to better myself as a person and i'm sorry for being bitter about it... Blessed Be -Rozlin

it is powerful and angry...unBELieveABle.i adore it,the words are almost dripping off the screen,and the formatting makes it even more effective.

i especially love the last lines,for reasons i actually can't ...wonderful.

() katherine swore innocence ()

I love that this is a stream of logic, not just consciousness, and how it questions, instead of always stating everything. Especially loved the word plays ALLtheFAULTS and ALLtheSIN. And I am absolutely in love with the word 'colortastescent-ed.'

delicious & poisonous. very, very angry.

love to rant. ain't that obvious? loved it. you can convert rants into poetry with uter beauty.

* noelle

ranting is awsome. it converts into poetry (so)well. love this.

The ending was superb. You kept this desperate voice throughout the entire poem and the end just sealed the deal. Wonderful poem. Love the style.