OMNOMNOMNOMNOM! gosh! this story is soo good too!

I absolutely love the describing of the outfits- very dark, mysterious and sexy! And I also love the whole silk scarf thing also make it more ~creepy but wants you to read on fosho!

VERY MOREISH! this whole story~

There was a bit of repetition though, for instance kill everyone off then move on to a similar main character though~ Maybe work on trying to differ the description of the personalities of new main characters ;)

GODDAMN IT I FREAKIN' LOVE PROPHECIES! You've got it all going on here XD The ver sexy outfits, the D/s, the secrets~ and fantasy etc GOSH! Also, the cliff hangers are awesomely great from a ~critic~ kinda point of view, but as a reader, I BLOODY HATE YOU! haha!

I'm addicted to your style of writing and ideas~ MORE LURKING OF YOUR PROFILE FER ME NAO!

Pleasse update this too!

MOAR NAO PLZKTHNXBAI

Wow!! I can't believe all that happened since the last time I read this story. That's so sad. :/ Arius is dead! I can't believe that. Now Diranus and Sentry are dead too. :'( This is so sad, but I still love your stories. Thanks for updating. Hope you can update again sometime soon. ^_^

Wow, I love this story! n_n I can't wait to find out what happens next. I really do want to know what Aiden plans to do with Arius, and I love the humor in the story. Update whenever you can. :]

Frankly, I never really expected Aiden to be THAT bad. He will get better, won't he? Still, this chapter does make me curious, and it's quite well-written too. Well done!;) You should really update sooner.

OMFGWTF! KEEP WRITTIGN THIS IS GETTING INTERESTING! O ARE YOU STILL GUNNA CONTINUE ON "RUN" THE SECOND PART ?

Wow. Utterly captivating. Seriously. I love this just as much as the original. I love Retribution and Malice. I'm so glad you're not going to let him die. That would have murdered me. Haha. Anyways, love this. Can't wait to see more!

Lost? What's a Lost? I'm so lost! ^^'

Wow this was a good chapter! I wonder how Malice will handle the child now, with Retribution haunting him it seems.

And Aiden and Arius...man that's a crazy pair!

Excellent work!

i'll think about it definitely! ur a great author! but i have college finals coming up in 2 weeks so i'm taking a break from writing for a bit. if ur interested, check out my stories here and see what u think. i'll keep ur offere in mind and i'll e-mail/PM u if i think of anything!

o man that was a good one! and the surprise totally threw me for a loop! keep up the awesome job!

aw >< i wish christmas was near then >

congratz on getting another chpater out! i luv it when u update, it's like finding $20 on the sidewalk!

OMG UR ALIVE! lol, gr8 chapter, such a tease! a few random blips here and there in terms of grammer, but it's all good!

Aws...You stopped. D: You have to continue, cuz I want Retribution to come back to life.

Dude, give the next chapter! I love your story!

Man, I hope you don't put Arius and Aiden together.
Aiden's a real man-**. Garrs is freakin' NINE FEET TALL?
Can you imagine trying to have sex with someone about 3 feet taller than you?
Talk about awkward. AND you killed Retribution.
Anywho, nice story so far, not moving quite as fast as some of you others where they fall in love like that *snaps hands for emphasis*
Ah, I gotta go, finnish this later!