Aw, how sweet. It could almost be the lyrics to a song. Very gentle, and sweet- I like it! Especially the repeated first and last lines.

short and sweet- i like this poem. Good job!

Ah...I like this..nice job..

Brandon

That was a good poem about friendship. I feel that way with Isis, Daniella, and Maikel, my best friends. I really like how you did it, and I think that short poems speak louder than long ones, because long ones have so much to hid what it is, unless there is a lot of repitition. No offense to those who like long poems, I like medium and long ones, too. Well, here is my review for now, and more will and Hugs,Aimee.

Thanks for the reviews! I like Indigo Inspiration a lot, so nice things said make me feel special! I'll try to keep the line length thing in mind when writing, thanks!

Onto yours . . .

I like the meaning behind the poem, but I think the phrasing is a little too repetative. I can't talk, since I do that a lot, but, there you go.

You are,/ always there for me

:sigh: Sometimes, life is too much . . .

all my love,felicia

YEAH! I like this poem. Hee. I like how there are all 5 senses (Correct me if I'm wrong.) Hee. Very, very good.

After a while I decided to stop trying to read it in another language and just read the one I could understand *lol*. Anyway, I really liked it and the setup made it flow really well.

aw, sweet sweet poem. keep writing!

beautiful and sweet, great job

interesting. the simplicity works well, surprising well in french too. im not gonna try chinese! iz xx