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| IshimaruTaki 2005-10-21 ch 1,  | abusegreat poem...I liked it...u never know when u are seeing a mask |
| Vivix 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseAngst, angst, angst, angst, angst, angst, cry me a freaking river. I'm sorry you're the person to receive this, but this has gone long enough. If you think life sucks, just go and say it! Nobody, unless they're a member of an exclusive group I like to call, 'people who actually believe they've seen humanity's bottom and moan about it for all of eternity,' cares about your bickering unless it is well written. Write with this much unnecessary emotion, and the writing will sound biased and stilted. Try... I don't know... saying YES every once in a while when people ask to go places. Relationships, no matter with who, help angst issues. First time I've tried to help someone instead of just dismissing them as idiots who don't grow up, and for the love of Aisha I hope it's the last. |
| Formerly 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseOr you could just, y'know, make some friends. |