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| Drizit 2005-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseWow. nice story man. Although its a bit toned down then the rest of your morbid stories. Well got to run. bye! |
| LancerDragoon 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseMorbid, in a bloody word. Sad too, but not enough to make me... feel for it. There IS some truth to what this story is about, and definitely, it brings up a mighty fine question indeed. But. Damn it, you made "I" change his mind way too quickly. It's like he held no particular core principle of his own. (Many people don't, but damn it!) The sudden change in attitude towards the save-friend's-life is too... bloody sudden. Yeah, yeah, I'll probably change my mind too, if I were him. Maybe, in my opinion, that is, you should have made him panic before deciding that, "Yeah, I want to get laid before I die. Sod my best friend." > |
| Autumnymph 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abusewhoa, freaky But a good story coz it makes ppl wonder what happens in the end. I like it. |
| s m e l l . o f . r a i n 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very thought-provoking, and told in such a believable, honest voice. It's all too easy to believe everything the narrator says. Very well written. |
| poetic abortion 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abusethis is, as another reviewer humbley stated, ridiculously good. the writing is flawless and just screams wonderous. really, you paint a vivid expanse of feelings and scene in your words. I can barely contain my self. I mean, it is a good clean short horror fiction. nothing over extravogent, just chill worhy, dramatic and riddled with twists and turns at any given point. really, an amazing story over all and something that will continue to amaze me. keep up the amazing work. you have so much talent it overflows! ~* noelle |
| RevolutionaryJ 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was, to put it simply, ridiculously good. It was like something out of one of those old collections of horror stories- short, sweet and to the point, with a twist that you really should see coming at the end, but still somehow manages to surprise you. ...Looks like I have yet another person to add to my favorite authors list. :) |