A wonderfully well written chapter once again. I love this story, it's one of my faves. It'd be awsome to have the twinshifter weapons. :) Please update soon, I can't wait to read what happens next.

Good descriptions... I really like the twin shifters and his reaction to getting them.

This new weapon sounds more interesting and useful.

I like this story, I especially like the detail and the point of view that it is written from. Very original idea, definitly gets my attention.

This is an amazing story. Very well detailed and it really keeps my attention. This is a wonderful idea and you are an excellent writer, you can really bring your stories to life. I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.