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| Koira 2008-09-24 ch 1,  | abuseUm. I have read this many times. It was new when I first read it, I think. And I just wanted to leave a review saying this doesn't stop getting to me, no matter how well I know the words already. Thank you for writing well =) |
| XsilentXescapeX 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. I liked that it didnt make too much sense and was sort of a ramble. It was different and sounded like it could be coming straight from someones mind. ~silent |
| Kohl Smeared Soulmate 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseLoved this, it was very tangible and atmospheric and you got a real understanding of the character the narrator is speaking about. The narrator makes you feel really sypathetic towards him ^_^ |
| jaybriel 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. You know, this is the first thing to come up when you type "slash" into fictionpress' search function. Rather appropriate (it's so well written, of course it's well written it is you after all), even if it's kind of ironic that it's one of the few fics out there that could really quite easily be interpreted as either het or slash (you never really mention the gender of the protagonist). Really beautiful, and even though I'll probably say it again when I get around to reviewing Stupid Post It Notes...Congratulations, you deserve all the happiness in the world ^-^ |
| AyumiYuy 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseJust a glimpse into a life, a moment. It left me with a million questions, but I love your writing style. You have a way with words. =) |
| Bi-curious George 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseOo, prettyful! It's a terrible shame the guy with pink hair isn't interested though, what kind of a 'weird' mood must you have been in to write that I wonder? Erm wait, that came out wrong and seems a tad pejorative, sorry, I just don't phrase very well. Very pretty but sad =[. |
| Inconspicuous Stranger 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI need to read more, meaning you need to update :D |
| Lac3d w1th p01s0n 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. You captured the emotion perfectly, it's a great story. I wish this were more than a oneshot. |
| randomicicle 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseHi, I was redirected here from Inmyth's LJ after reading some of her stories. I'm glad I did, this was wonderful. I was checking your other stories.. I'd love to read them, but that'll just have to wait for another time since they seem pretty long. Nice work. I just created my account on so if you had one on LJ or itll be great. If not, I guess I'll just have to keep coming back here to check up on this :) Sorry if this wasn't a constructive/useful review, but I really just wanted to say I like your way of writing very much and hope to see more of you around here. |
| Crowley 2007-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing. |
| hairy-mushroom-nose 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseYou wrote that at 3am? Ohmigod you lucky biatch! At 3am I would like... DIE before I could write something like that. |
| Rock Queen 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseKool story! Yea I kinda know how u feel, once this boy I had a crush on (HAD a crush on) was at this party with me, and asked if he wanted to dance with me. On the outside I was like "Sure", but inside I was like "HELL YES!" XD Anyway, this was a great story! Well CYA! XD |
| Markus Ripley 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is very well written, I love the way you describe words without being to verby (he did this, he did that, she said this, she walked over here). Most authors are way to verby... Great job, I liked it alot. Ripley |
| Kharris Kyryn 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abusewow, that was really great even if you say it wa quick ^.^ nice imagery and word choice |
| Megas Alexandros 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseNice story. I wouldn't call it ramble. It has a heart.) |