Reviews for Waiting For The Rain

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ashley m.c 2006-03-28 ch 1,	abusewow. I liked this. I like writing about writing :) Although, it sounds kind of emo. Then again, all writers have to have a tinge of that. Well, on to read some more of your stuff.
skylines 2006-03-27 ch 1,	abuseA great poem... I hope you don't mind if I put alittle constructive critisism on her... I think you could find a way to make your lines flow a bit better. It sounds a little cut up when you read it. Yes- I know that mood- :)
LEDlorien7 2006-03-14 ch 1,	abusewhoa, cool. i love how the poem is sort of about writing the poem, but not. does that make sense? yeah, anyways i like
Broken Melody 2006-03-04 ch 1,	abuse'I pull a piece of paper to me, forcing my thoughts Out through my pen, forcing the ink to flow and Draw my thoughts on the page, turning emotions into looping lines Words spill from my hand as evils from Pandora’s Box' I remember focusing on my emotions and scribbing them into journal all the time or poetry. I think it sounded wonderful how you twisted it into something creative like 'looping lines,' I have never thought of it that way.I enjoy how I can relate to my favorite sentences. 'Last of them all, a tiny, fluttering, invisible comfort – My peace of mind. It rains.' It is amazing how the simplist thing, I think, is so comforting. Well done.
Finger Dingbat 2005-12-17 ch 1,	abusegreat job ... (did anyone tell you, ur an amaxing writer?) i know the feeling, when it acutlly hurts 2 write something down, but you have to... cos ur head so full of words it could possibly explode?-keep it up, and please write more
sloppy firsts 2005-12-13 ch 1,	abuseoh this was beautiful. it finally rains when the mind is at peace.
SaimiChan 2005-11-28 ch 1,	abusewah! the wonders of the deep poetry that people hold inside. it makes me go tsuru tsuru! hehehe. ^^
blacktearsof*innocence 2005-11-01 ch 1,	abusewow, how could i have missed this one? anyways, good job on this. i love the awesome images you put in here. "draw my thoughts on the page..." and "words spill from my hand" are one of my fav's. good job and KW! luv always,~davida
White Tea and Ginger 2005-10-30 ch 1,	abuseI -love- this. I can so relate. And I love rain. I loved this line; 'I pull a piece of paper to me, forcing my thoughts/Out through my pen, forcing the ink to flow and/Draw my thoughts on the page, turning emotions into looping lines'. I feel that way so often. Amazing. I also like the ending line, it's symbolic. You're too amazing. Keep writing.Hillary.
Lostwind 2005-10-28 ch 1,	abuseSoothing, yet exciting, pulls me into the writing, good work.
words music and love stay t... 2005-10-26 ch 1,	abusehe he! i like this poem! The imagery is great. Sometimes poems written when you are in a weird mood turn out to be the best ones! My favorite line is "my mind runs in circles blocked my my own memories". Go icewolf9, glad she made you put it up here! The Scottish DragonP.S. Thanks for your review of my poem. You're better at writting reviews than I am.
Taintless 2005-10-25 ch 1,	abuseLoved it. This is my favourite of all the stuff you've done. The others of your poems have been great, and the ideas interesting, but this...this is really original. Loved the last line. "It rains." I guess we can all get this because we all write, I suppose. This was just...brilliant. I SO get taht feeling! You've just expressed it perfectly. Great work, I tell you!
Totally-Fuzz 2005-10-25 ch 1,	abusewell written, lovely imagery. its something i think any writer can relate to. Do you enjoy the rain? i know i do, theres just something relaxing about it, like all your worries are being washed away.
rrmehta364 2005-10-24 ch 1,	abusea good thing you were forced to put this up on gunpoint. very well written.
Ether Boy 2005-10-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is rather cool. i like that line, 'words spill from my hand as evils from pandoras box,' sounds eerie.

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