jesus the summary just amazed me in its perfection. i can't, honestly can't, tell you how true this rang and how perfectly expressed it was, but.. surely you can guess? AH

love it, twisted and darkly humourus. truth? either way wicked poem, you describe it well.

I liked the sort of remote passion in this piece. Both good imagery and evoked feeling were included. Very nice.

very touching. very good. keep writing.

This is hilarious and I love the style used. I love how she's just passively lying there, so very noncholant about the whole thing. It makes me giggle. Very nice.

i love your wording, it adds so much to the imagery and overall feeling in the poem. it makes me smile.