This was awesome too. But I doubt I got the same message you were writing about. In any case I found I could relate... your work is so refreshing... no wonder you're on everyone's favourites list.

Intriguing, I like it.

this a very nice poem. i actually get alot of idea's when i read this which keeps my mind more intent on your poem. i find that as a good thing. well, great job and KW. and thanx for the review!

davida

I like this a lot... its less abstract than usual... nicely done

i like this...speaks to me a lot...well done.

lots of loveAC

perfect.

yes it is an amazing song, i love it too. brilliant poem, too, its choppy and sharp yet soothing and sparkling. i love: "music louder than the sun"

Makes me think of Manhattan. And I love the line "(this city life's not half bad)" Parentheses rock.

It's insane how inspiring your poems are.

This is beautiful. You're deeper than the deepest well. I actually have to read your poems more than onec. I love the line "isn't it lovely when the stars don't outshine." This is wonderful poetry.

Love it. Especially the image of 'music louder than the sun' and seeing people other than stars; or other way around? people instead of stars? As always, love how it can be read so many different ways. Like the new pen name too.

there is little to say that hasn't been said - this is gorgeous, breath taking, and stunning but leaves me so scatter brained ( a.k.a: ) when it comes to word use or even the simplist of praise. I mean it, this leaves one dumbstruck.

you write poetry so well. :)

* noelle

m yummy...

oh, this is so brathtaking! so much careless intesity, makes me feel like i'm drowning, almost. great job.

I like this, it sticks out. Nice job.

wow, i cant even remember the last time i went to a big city, though this makes me feel like a city at night.

you cant see the lights due to all of the smog, but maybe its just me.

lovely.

ah, i see you like MCR from your profile. New Jersey, heehee.