I love it, its something new from you. I am a huge fan of yours, from here and Quizilla. I am glad you decided to do this and I hope another update happens.

-Kayla

Oi like it lotsupdate soon!!

Kasey, Kasey, Kasey... ABOUT DAMN TIME YOU STARTED A NEW STORY! LOL. Just kidding. I'm reading and reviewing this from my first period class...Keyboarding...of all classes.

Wow, I had no idea you started something new. If I did, I would've reviewed a lot sooner. I thought I had you on Author Alert... Anyway, on to the chapter.

Like all of your other stories...the description was SUPERB! I was able to visualize everything that was happening, WHEN it was happening. You're so great at that.

Secondly, I wonder what it was that lured Alicia to the basement...and better yet, what it was that killed her. A ghost?

This is a great start...I hope you plan on giving us more. Good job, Kasey! ^_~

~*C.B.*~

Yay! New work from you. *Is thrilled* And you didn't disappoint. A gripping chapter from the get go. Nice detail, nice pace, nice rhythm. Keep it up.

That was odd, but interesting. Write more soon, I want to know what happened!

Regards,Ari

You had me fromt he first sentance: gorgeous. One thing, though: it should be 'past the kitchen' not 'passed the kitchen'. (probably just a typo, i've done that before. just thought you'd like to know.)