Wow, great poem!

Really interesting idea - I love it!

I love the "Sun is our king, moon is our queen" When I think about it I see the resemblance. I like the bit about the stars, really lovely.

And an unusual take on god being the father and the Earth being the mother. I've never thought about it like that before, it's a really intersting idea!

Great ending as well, I like the direction you took the poem in. Great all round poem!

Thanks for the review! Wow, you read seven chapters all at once!! ;-) Thanks!

You take a very Pagan tone in this; I like it. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.