wow not bad alex...alex URGENT either my computers screen names have been screwed with or all of aol is down! need you to call me! You can take this review off idf you want just need you too read this!

Kwel!

I don't know much about Norse mythology but I followed the poem quite well and those few words showed great imagery of fiery darkness but with a bitter cold emptiness too. You're talented here if you're only 13!

Wow, thanks for all your reviews. Yeah, in some of the earlier ones there are a load of spelling/grammar mistakes, and the slash in now/here was intended. Thanks for noticing it hehe.

I like the foreign flavours in this, it feels mysterious and pleasantly murky. Nice job.

admittedly i know nothing of norse mythology but your poem porvides a powerful but dark image of this overpowering giant. Good word usage.