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| Raindog Rampant 2006-03-14 ch 37, | abuseBeautiful. Your style is wonderfully grotty, very real without the restraint I've noticed in people trying to write about "underground" scenes, especially those of London. I was fortunate enough to experience enough of it during a summer tour of Europe, and I think you captured it very well. I enjoyed the story, as well as your portrayel of the characters. It's rare that I like both aspects of a piece. It's always either a wonderful plot, but ultimately forgettable charactors, or very well developed charactors and no plot. I seem to be rambling. Anyway, I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you. |
| rainbow-dementia 2006-01-23 ch 37, | abuseI'm so glad they finally get back together again (I hope). And I hope they learnt a very good lesson. I, too, am going to miss reading this story. |
| Freakage 2006-01-16 ch 37, | abuseHa! I absolutely loved how you ended the chapter; pure, hilariousness, even if that isn't a word. |
| ziggy pop eno 2006-01-15 ch 37, | abuseAmazing! My favorite chapter yet. It's going to be a great ending, I can tell--I'll miss this story. |
| FoRd PrEfEcT13 2006-01-15 ch 37, | abuseI just read this whole thing. It's really good, despite some massive conventions errors. |
| rainbow-dementia 2006-01-10 ch 36, | abuseI liked this chapter. I hope Cal will realize how Mac feels about her. They do need each other. Great job. Can't wait for more! |
| scrtshdfgry 2006-01-04 ch 36, | abusei like this. keep it up. |
| Freakage 2006-01-04 ch 36, | abuseKick **, reminds me of the Cobalt scene, or what it used to be, in Vancouver. Really excited to read more. |
| ziggy pop eno 2006-01-04 ch 36, | abuseWhat a sweet chapter. Nice to have something good happen to them :D Happy new year! |
| sixtytwokg 2006-01-04 ch 35, | abusehaven't read this in a while.. i liked "Dare" and "It's Not Worth It" which is not to say i didn't like the rest, but those were the two chapters i really liked "because I just don't care," i enjoyed reading that line, Callahan's behavior is fascinating |
| rainbow-dementia 2005-12-17 ch 35, | abuseAh, the beginning of a breakthrough for Cal. Can't wait to read more! |
| ziggy pop eno 2005-12-15 ch 35, | abuseI think perhaps Cal's getting closer to admitting her feelings for Mac. This chapter really seems like a development. Good job. |
| rainbow-dementia 2005-12-14 ch 34, | abuseI feel like giving them both a big smack. Cal is becoming so tragic. She certainly needs something to make her feel alive again and that's Mac (or I least think so). I can't wait until the next chapter! |
| ziggy pop eno 2005-12-14 ch 34, | abuseIs mac going to do something about it I hope he does. Another good chapter! |
| rainbow-dementia 2005-12-12 ch 33, | abuseI am kind of curious about what happened in those few months. Anyways, I hope Mac and Cal will be able to get back together. They are both so stubborn! |