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Raindog Rampant
2006-03-14
ch 37,
abuseBeautiful. Your style is wonderfully grotty, very real without the restraint I've noticed in people trying to write about "underground" scenes, especially those of London. I was fortunate enough to experience enough of it during a summer tour of Europe, and I think you captured it very well. I enjoyed the story, as well as your portrayel of the characters. It's rare that I like both aspects of a piece. It's always either a wonderful plot, but ultimately forgettable charactors, or very well developed charactors and no plot.

I seem to be rambling.

Anyway, I enjoyed it immensely.

Thank you.
rainbow-dementia
2006-01-23
ch 37,
abuseI'm so glad they finally get back together again (I hope). And I hope they learnt a very good lesson. I, too, am going to miss reading this story.
Freakage
2006-01-16
ch 37,
abuseHa! I absolutely loved how you ended the chapter; pure, hilariousness, even if that isn't a word.
ziggy pop eno
2006-01-15
ch 37,
abuseAmazing! My favorite chapter yet. It's going to be a great ending, I can tell--I'll miss this story.
FoRd PrEfEcT13
2006-01-15
ch 37,
abuseI just read this whole thing. It's really good, despite some massive conventions errors.
rainbow-dementia
2006-01-10
ch 36,
abuseI liked this chapter. I hope Cal will realize how Mac feels about her. They do need each other. Great job. Can't wait for more!
scrtshdfgry
2006-01-04
ch 36,
abusei like this. keep it up.
Freakage
2006-01-04
ch 36,
abuseKick **, reminds me of the Cobalt scene, or what it used to be, in Vancouver. Really excited to read more.
ziggy pop eno
2006-01-04
ch 36,
abuseWhat a sweet chapter. Nice to have something good happen to them :D Happy new year!
sixtytwokg
2006-01-04
ch 35,
abusehaven't read this in a while.. i liked "Dare" and "It's Not Worth It"

which is not to say i didn't like the rest, but those were the two chapters i really liked

"because I just don't care," i enjoyed reading that line, Callahan's behavior is fascinating
rainbow-dementia
2005-12-17
ch 35,
abuseAh, the beginning of a breakthrough for Cal. Can't wait to read more!
ziggy pop eno
2005-12-15
ch 35,
abuseI think perhaps Cal's getting closer to admitting her feelings for Mac. This chapter really seems like a development. Good job.
rainbow-dementia
2005-12-14
ch 34,
abuseI feel like giving them both a big smack. Cal is becoming so tragic. She certainly needs something to make her feel alive again and that's Mac (or I least think so). I can't wait until the next chapter!
ziggy pop eno
2005-12-14
ch 34,
abuseIs mac going to do something about it I hope he does. Another good chapter!
rainbow-dementia
2005-12-12
ch 33,
abuseI am kind of curious about what happened in those few months. Anyways, I hope Mac and Cal will be able to get back together. They are both so stubborn!
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