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Reviews For: Chill Beneath the Heat

Saxifrage
2005-09-18
ch 1,
abusePRETY! that's so good! You have such a talent for poetry. The repeating line of "orange and red" at first doesn't really seem nessecary, but if you read it a couple of times, it fits in perfectly. YEP! this is one of those poems you analyze over and over again to make sure you got the full meaning. xD

keep writing! loofa for posting it! xD

xoxo
NaughtyGnome
2005-09-18
ch 1,
abusepretty cool poem
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