|Reviews for Dragons|
| lijuan 5/29/10 . chapter 1
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| lael1bologna 12/16/08 . chapter 1
really loved it! keep writing!
| Creative1014 9/30/08 . chapter 1
| Caecilia 8/13/08 . chapter 1
I liked this piece, but it seems to me that some of the rhyming at the end of the sentences seemed a bit forced.
I liked how this was from the view of a dragon, very interesting
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| Fluffy Piranha 9/15/07 . chapter 1
Great work you have here. Love the depiction of a dragon in this poem, very stunning. I've got a few corrections, though.
1.) I’ll fly away on dragons wings
(( * I'll fly away on dragon's wings * ))
2.) Most run when I advance
(( This doesn't exactly fit for me, regarding the sentence before it...perhaps something like below?
* And most will run when I advance * ))
3.) I’m older then you, although I am young
(( * I'm older than you, although I am young * ))
4.) Beware: me vengeance is terrible
(( * Beware: my vengeance is terrible * ))
| Siamh 7/12/07 . chapter 1
This is a really good. Surprising because I don't usually read poetry however I noticed your review count and word count, to say the least I was curious. I am happy I got to read this!
| Reggid 6/30/07 . chapter 1
I really like this. Very nice job on the poem.
| puppymobile 2/2/07 . chapter 1
i really liked it. it had some good visual sentences that sounded very nice. keep it up!
| Sparkle Freak 10/19/05 . chapter 1
Oh wow, you are so right, I didnt think about it before now. It does remind me of Draco, (awsome movie, the secound one was bad though :( anyway) Good work Lakoria, I like this one, good use of words, and a great point of view.
| T41N7 9/21/05 . chapter 1
Yay, I love dragon stuff! I really liked the line "I am older that you, although I am young" That doesn't apply to some elves though. I generally really like fantasy poems, especially when they rhyme. Keep posting your stuff, you're an amazing writer!
| StephanieQueen 9/19/05 . chapter 1
This poem rocks my socks! The description of the dragon was so amazing. You're very talented.
| nightdragon0 9/19/05 . chapter 1
Tells a powerful image of the dragon, and a nice one.
| Lakona 9/18/05 . chapter 1
I love the symbolism.
Great one Jen :)
| S. M. Sargent 9/18/05 . chapter 1
This poem started out strongly but pittled out towards the end... is that the end? It doesn't feel much like an ending to me.
| RoadWreckRob 9/18/05 . chapter 1
This poem reminds me of Draco from the movie Dragonheart. Keep writing - it is a good work. Hope to see you RR some of mine sometime.