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really loved it! keep writing!

Nice.

I liked this piece, but it seems to me that some of the rhyming at the end of the sentences seemed a bit forced.

I liked how this was from the view of a dragon, very interesting

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Caecilia

Great work you have here. Love the depiction of a dragon in this poem, very stunning. I've got a few corrections, though.

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1.) I’ll fly away on dragons wings

(( * I'll fly away on dragon's wings * ))

2.) Most run when I advance

(( This doesn't exactly fit for me, regarding the sentence before it...perhaps something like below?

* And most will run when I advance * ))

3.) I’m older then you, although I am young

(( * I'm older than you, although I am young * ))

4.) Beware: me vengeance is terrible

(( * Beware: my vengeance is terrible * ))

This is a really good. Surprising because I don't usually read poetry however I noticed your review count and word count, to say the least I was curious. I am happy I got to read this!

I really like this. Very nice job on the poem.

i really liked it. it had some good visual sentences that sounded very nice. keep it up!

Oh wow, you are so right, I didnt think about it before now. It does remind me of Draco, (awsome movie, the secound one was bad though :( anyway) Good work Lakoria, I like this one, good use of words, and a great point of view.

Yay, I love dragon stuff! I really liked the line "I am older that you, although I am young" That doesn't apply to some elves though. I generally really like fantasy poems, especially when they rhyme. Keep posting your stuff, you're an amazing writer!

This poem rocks my socks! The description of the dragon was so amazing. You're very talented.

Tells a powerful image of the dragon, and a nice one.

I love the symbolism.

Great one Jen :)

This poem started out strongly but pittled out towards the end... is that the end? It doesn't feel much like an ending to me.

This poem reminds me of Draco from the movie Dragonheart. Keep writing - it is a good work. Hope to see you RR some of mine sometime.