Sounds very interesting. A new twist. Please update!

Hahaha... Awesome! This sounds like quite a fun story! It must be even more to write!

Haha, oh wow. I am amused beyond words. This is going on my favourites list. ^^

This is awesome. Siral is wonderfully obnoxious, and I really enjoyed the elf-dude-what's-his-face's dillemna. Keep going. This is good stuff.

I love this story. If you don't continue it, I'll hunt you down and 'persuade' you to finish it. And what was that about explosions? I can't wait!

-SapphireIris

that is my sn... but for some reason it won't let me add you to any of my lists... i haven't read your story yet but i'm going to!