Man that was cool. Very wicked. I would like to see this kind of writing in a long story from you, cause you seem to know what you are doing. Death seems to be your thing, and you could make one hecka good death scene between two characters in a lengthy story. Great job.

Are you Vigdis Dammyr (I've never heard of him/her). If you are this applies to you, if not, well, just ignore it.Hooray! Once again you manage to force me into a story about dying (this is strange... but I like it.) You have, on two very fine occasions, managed to take something as solemn and badly considered of as death, and actually make it seem exciting (in a sense). The dragon you used is evidence that you have a good, very good imagination.Although I did find some two errors with your adverbs [I think] (you had "e" where "y" should have been e.g. possible instead of possibly), I will definitely not chew off your head for it simply because the overall story has really pleased me...I think you lifted my mood...thanks...