   Natasha Borialis 2007-03-31 . chapter 1very pretty. |
 karmakaze 2006-07-28 . chapter 1I love how this whole poem takes place in a single moment. Again, great work. |
 Chandra-Moon 2005-12-19 . chapter 1This is quite good; "burning days tickling our bare arms" really stood out to me. |
 not sure yet 2005-11-01 . chapter 1love the last line, so prettful and spring sad, muchly awesome imagery, just beautifully beautifully done |
 APersonAndAHalf 2005-10-24 . chapter 1This is amazing. Beautiful imagery.~A. Person |
 pneumothorax 2005-10-15 . chapter 1Quickly creates a strong image. This is good. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-09 . chapter 1How it grips my heart so fervently. |
 the dreamer in your pocket 2005-10-05 . chapter 1beautiful. i love the imagery, especially in the beginning. and the last two lines. i love those. they're nicely contrasted.
::kudos:: |
 rustupidorjustnotbright 2005-09-28 . chapter 1Beautifully written, I especially enjoyed the lines, "with all of the faith and burning days tickling our bare arms." |
 simpleplan13 2005-09-26 . chapter 1beautiful piece.. the imagery is awesome... great poem |
 twenty-second seduction 2005-09-21 . chapter 1memories, especially ones in poems, are always beautiful. |
 Faithless Juliet 2005-09-20 . chapter 1I love how this is so defined, yet also loose enough for the reader to interpret. A beautifully writen peice, it was like a novel in 16 verses. I loved it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet. |
 lackluster 2005-09-19 . chapter 1it reminds me faintly of random nights in random lives. i love the feeling. |
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