 my dangerous angel baby 2005-12-25 . chapter 1I really like how this piece had good points about how racism still, in fact, does exist and a little altruism in the mix but it was a little bit too pessimistic an outlook. The boy dies and everyone gets angry at each other about it but it kind of makes it seem that there is no hope for anyone doing anything to stop it. But then again that can go to prove how intense hatred can be. Great job! |