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| WMystic 2006-10-17 ch 1,  | abuseHaha-very cool! I like it! BTW-Are you going to keep going with the "He is unwanted" story? ~WMystic |
| Nemonus 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseOh! Sonnets! Gladness. There are a lot of good words in here--"Oh, sinisterly scalèd sleeping snake-" "fearsome serpent sails,". Only "shield-like scales" broke the awesomeness a little, being too used before. Very nice!! |
| partbritishtowhead 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseOh. How majestic. ~Your Freak of Nature~ |
| Alankria 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI can tell you had fun writing this, and it was good to read too. I can't help but think of the dragon from 'The Hobbit'. I especially liked the final couplet, but it was all good; you managed to describe the scene vividly enough for me to imagine it, while at the same time fit the rules of a sonnet without it sounding forced. Congrats. |
| KuhPow 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseNever liked Shakespeare, but this was interesting, keep up the good work *thumbs up* and write more fantasy :D |
| Scooz 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. I am not much of a Shakespeare person, excluding Hamlet, but this was really good. It had a lot of the elements from the older sort of literature. Writing in the old English ways is not easy but it is a fun challenge and you did a pretty good job. |