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| The Astronaut 2006-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseArgh. This ground on my senses like shoving a cat into a blender. Horrible. |
| Mykell 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseI like the 2nd line, but the 1st line is especially unpoetic. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI think that's the life of a surfer; I don't really know any surfers so I can't say. Enjoyable peices, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |