|Reviews for Tedious Excitement|
| grafiti rtk 6/26/06 . chapter 6
This is really good. It reminds me a little of Roald Dahl's short stories and their twist endings. Only, on a much much smaller scale. I really liked The Forbidden Love. I definitely didn't see that one coming.
| Elf maiden-Peniel 10/1/05 . chapter 6
one word sums this up
| Arkash 9/29/05 . chapter 6
Great little piece!
Funny how we're bogged down in red tape.
Good Job! *_*
| Arkash 9/29/05 . chapter 5
I loved this one.
Especially the phrase, "A pair of electrons danced a femtoscopic waltz." So scientifically poetic. *_*
| Arkash 9/29/05 . chapter 4
Now write one about a girl shaving her legs.
| Elf maiden-Peniel 9/26/05 . chapter 5
hm, interesting, seems a bit pointless but it is interesting
| Monev11235 9/21/05 . chapter 4
Haha, I love this one!
| Mbwun lazy 9/21/05 . chapter 4
Nice. I particularly like the razor one.
| Monev11235 9/20/05 . chapter 3
Haha, I love this. Brilliant, man, brilliant.
| Alnitak Z Orion 9/20/05 . chapter 3
Words surely have power, and they deceive, as you just proved it in these two little chapters.
Good Job, keep adding. *_*
| Alnitak Z Orion 9/20/05 . chapter 2
Too bad for the cookie.
| Alnitak Z Orion 9/20/05 . chapter 1
OK, let's see what you chose for this one.