Its always a treat to read a poem or story that gives me chills. I -felt- your shower of light spray across my back when I read that line.

I'm one to love and hate scieantists. They give us all the anwsers to everything that has no vaule. Ah, sweet, sweet irony.

The only thing that caught my eye was your use of 'baby' in the last couple of lines. I only point it out because, even though I love this poem, I wanted to give you something to think about.