Beautiful poem. I could picture someone letting go and going to up heaven. Great work.

very easy going poem, though the subject matter is a painful one. straightforward and sad. not bad! (and ages ago you reviewed my "Ruby Tuesday Letters." i kinda forgot they were there but i finally finished them if you want to have a look. adios) -the Lady Elaine

This is fantastic I quite like it*claps*

Really awesome, the only thing i didnt like, minor complaint because my inner ear refused to cooperate, was the use of the word like, lol i kept hearing "like, sure, whatever" instead of "just like when" ...but i love it, its sad and angsty in a non anxious sort of way.

This is great. The emotion you showed in it just seemed so honest amd real. It's a really good poem.