nice. very descriptive, and just such great choice of words. I enjoyed this.

The phrasing and random feeling rhyme of this is great. Again, the ability to tell a story and draw people in, is something you clearly have. Excellent work.

Favorite line?"That time of Doctor Innocent and Mister Simple Intelligent"Yarr, man.You make me think of half-remembered childhood dreams, little moments where time doesn't seem to exist and why people cling and laugh so desperately.

This is so melancholy and touching... It makes me think empty sky, once filled with brightness, and those incredible words you used only make the blank spaces wider. Good old days..