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| jaybriel 2007-12-31 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome, you seriously live up to the standard of some of the best writers on this site ^-^ |
| paputsza 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abusewtf this isn't done, update. Have i said this before? |
| Back of Beyond 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseFunny story, shame it's not been updated. :( |
| magalina 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! Really funny. Hope you keep writing! Can`t wait for more. |
| firestar267 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD! This is so awesome! Such a good story, funny as hell. your writing style is amazing! Keep it up and PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Limited Edition 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseNOO! Why was the ending so abrupt?! Will there be another chapter or is it complete? T_T It was just getting good *cries* You're awesome! Such imagination XD |
| pneumothorax 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseRegarding the collaborative effort by Ree and Hani - if this is your version of cliche, you could over-power some several hundred writers here. I really liked it :) Even if it somewhat unrealistic. |
| Rachel 2005-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my holy God, I love you guys. You write more, and I won't hunt you down and subject you to renaissance ** songs, got it? Oh, right, the actual review. Well done in regards to vernacular speech and character development. You've done a lot in your first chapter without making it seemed rushed! Dialogue is easy between Reese and Taylor, which is mega-cool. Let's see... fixits? Don't think I have any, it's all pretty grammar-ok. Oh, oh. Also: 'rainbowing'? Right. Great job! Much love. Write more. |
| rodeoclown 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseI'm dense. I was trying to figure out what the '** count' refered to at the beginning. And then about the part where the car stalled out...I was like 'Oh...' This first chapter cracked me up. It's like a jacked up version of my student life. Taylor and Reese are wicked cool. There's so much sexual tension between them, I feel the room is going to explode when they're together. Except it actually does. I liked the waiter guy too...he's a nice addition to the will they or won't they drama. I'm on the edge of my seat for more. |
| City Lights Burn Like Stars 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseilike it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon |
| smileyface 2005-09-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, great story so far. I'll continue reading later. |
| Washington Irving 2005-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abusepros:funny. ** hilarious, actually. cute, believable characters. one-of-a-kind sandals. curly hair. freckles. adorability in eight and a half thousand words. the reese-mobile. amazing dialogue. pretty much everything. cons:only one chapter. :( update? |
| lemoncake 2005-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseDEFINITELY worth the read. Lol, I think I may have woken up the entire neighborhood laughing. ^^ Update! UPDATE SOON! |
| burn 2005-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abusehehe. you're funny. keep writing i like it. |
| xiao xiang 2005-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is awesome, for lack of a better word. you have already created amazing characters through this one chapter. i am so happy about the long chapter, because that gives me a lot to chew on while i wait for the next one. and there had better be a next one. |