i like this, it's beautiful, it's different from what i've read around here.

It feels like a poem of a feeling you get when the topic just makes you think about it. But, of course, I could be completely wrong. Awsome poem, love it. Keep it up!

I like the finality of this; nothing is everlasting, but nothing is really ever ending either. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.