Very descriptive and well thought out. Imagery that truly stays with the reader, wonderful.

I liked the poem. It was like a long metaphor for lost love. It was interesting how you compared it to a pinecone but the ending was a little strange. I didn't understand if you were talking about new love or if you were talking about the lost love growing-or what? But it was good.Thanks for the review!~Tzotel.

I like that, it's a different approach at writing romance poetry. I love your description throughtout the whole thing; it's beautiful! Thanks for the review too!