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| A. J. Krautwurst 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuse"and then everything is coloured by you and it’s just so useless after that" what a beautiful line. it's so sincere and you express yourself really well. the images you use here are really fresh. |
| euphemismsforlukewarmtraged... 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseoh, this is beautiful. there is so much electricity in your words, it's just so flowing & intense, & there's that subtle bitter undertone that i can feel. f*ck, i know exactly how this feels. well done. oh & thanks for your gorgeous reveiw. i am flattered =] |
| account not in use 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseyou had me feeling the pain, feeling it eat at me. wonderful writing. |
| smile persephone 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. The imagery, the style -- everything. I adore " your name suddenly blooms inside my head like the coldest of stars and it hurts so double edged (like blue tinged electricity)". |
| lackluster 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseyou have this way of using words in this, that makes me read it again and again, it's really amazing. very effective. |
| GypsyMothra 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the metaphor of the stars you used. Very effective and nice imagery. Another great piece by you! :) |
| Jitterrue 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseoh i know the pain. nice description |
| perdita's kiss 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abusewow, nice... >Cheers |