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A. J. Krautwurst
2006-09-27
ch 1,
abuse"and then everything is coloured by you and it’s just so useless after that"

what a beautiful line. it's so sincere and you express yourself really well. the images you use here are really fresh.
euphemismsforlukewarmtraged...
2005-09-28
ch 1,
abuseoh, this is beautiful. there is so much electricity in your words, it's just so flowing & intense, & there's that subtle bitter undertone that i can feel. f*ck, i know exactly how this feels. well done.

oh & thanks for your gorgeous reveiw. i am flattered =]
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2005-09-21
ch 1,
abuseyou had me feeling the pain, feeling it eat at me. wonderful writing.
smile persephone
2005-09-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful. The imagery, the style -- everything. I adore " your name suddenly blooms inside my head like the coldest of stars and it hurts so double edged (like blue tinged electricity)".
lackluster
2005-09-20
ch 1,
abuseyou have this way of using words in this, that makes me read it again and again, it's really amazing. very effective.
GypsyMothra
2005-09-20
ch 1,
abuseI love the metaphor of the stars you used. Very effective and nice imagery. Another great piece by you! :)
Jitterrue
2005-09-19
ch 1,
abuseoh i know the pain. nice description
perdita's kiss
2005-09-19
ch 1,
abusewow, nice...

>Cheers
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