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| Blue Moon Eternal 2006-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseI think you did a wonderful job, especially when you consider the requirements for the assignment. You were very descriptive and I think you portrayed the different personalities very well. I really like this story; even though you said you it didn't quite reach your expectations. All in all I thought it was amazing and I think you could get this published if you tried. Great! |