Reviews for Just One More Day

Reviews For: Just One More Day

ess3sandra 2007-01-31 ch 1,	dark yet strong. life
katie valentine 2006-11-23 ch 1,	hey i can actually feel her pain.nicee! i like this one-shot! =DD
Leaving Here 2006-08-08 ch 1,	wow. this is great. i love the whole idea. i like the last line of the whole thing.~Liz
Lindsay 2005-12-17 ch 1,	Good idea! I like how the characters are vague, but it fits the story in that respect. =3 Really nice how you wrote it, too. Lately I've been having trouble starting to read new stories, but as I read the first few lines of yours, they held my attention. Very well done.
sloppy firsts 2005-10-18 ch 1,	found a link to your story on LJ and i gotta say i wasn't disappointed =]
NehemiaH 2005-10-17 ch 1,	what happened to you? you just fell off the face of the earth... heh what happened to your other shorts too? like this one, i loved them. you were really on to something. and i seriously mean that.
writtenreality 2005-10-14 ch 1,	very cute, i love the character interaction :)xx
Insanity Da Best Policy 2005-09-24 ch 1,	Aw that was such a unique and beautiful piece of work! Wonderful wonderful. Keep 'em coming. Janet
through these jaded eyes 2005-09-21 ch 1,	this is really uniqyue.. i really like it .. plz continue
Just Another Airhead 2005-09-21 ch 1,	This is good. I found it from your post on LJ. I think it ends well and don't actually believe that a short story has to have a 'meaning'like one of the other reviewers said, but thats just my opinion. I like how no names are used and its just a quick glimpse into someones life - I didn't feel like I needed to know anymore than you chose to tell us. And the whole addiction thing was a good way to describe how she was feeling. I know a lot of people who could relate to this. Good job! :)
Gonzogrig 2005-09-20 ch 1,	not bad. It's an interesting concept.It's actually the same kind of thing I have in one my stories. A bit too vague, but I like the ending. keep it up
emerald 2005-09-20 ch 1,	sigh short story? cmon...it needs a better ending...we need to know when this ends...or even if it ever ends...and what about the guy? why's he doing this? does he have a wife and children? does he have feelings for her (probably) and is he ever going to admit them? is she really going to end up alone as her friends predict? you know short stories are only meaningful when they have a significant or a satisfying ending...this one doesnt (no offence meant- just being honest)...but i love your writing! you are really talented and short is good but give us an ending!
miss-blackhair 2005-09-20 ch 1,	i think this is an awesome masterpiece... i call it masterpiece coz its really really good. hope to hear more from you! =)
Endless Dark 2005-09-20 ch 1,	Okay, well I just left you a review over at your LJ, but I decided to come here as well. (Wow, it's been awhile since I've hung around FP.) Like I said before -- fantastic job! And I agree with you on the no-names. I admit I've done it mainly b/c I was being lazy, but in this story, it works very well. :)
ellabella 2005-09-20 ch 1,	hm, my friend had been having casual sex with a guy who is two years older than her and has a kid. he is poisoning her. she'll pick him over anyone, any day of the week even though he is never there for her and leaves her in tears for her friends (those she shuns) to pick up the pieces. i believe she's addicted to him. and the sad part now is that she is pregnant with his child and doesn't want to give any of it up, not even get her ground where she can at leats be her own ruler. it's too late now, seems she's five months pregnant. and she's burning her bridges, turning on anyone who has ever been there for her. she'll be dependant on him alone one day, and that's no right, since he can't even depend on himself. She was going to go to college. she still thinks she will too. But I don’t know if this will be too much for her to handle. everyone has their limits and this guy has broken hers too many times for a baby not to. She was my best friend. And I really hope she does get to do what she wants, even if she is addicted to him, shunning me the harshest way she knows how. I guess, like an addict, it swallowed her whole and left nothing of her former self, nothing of the girl I befriended as a child and grew up with for so many years. She would have been brilliant, had she not been addicted. Thankyou for posting this. -ellabella

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