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| Britani- Friend of the Bear... 2006-06-26 ch 1,   | Standing ovation to the next Shakespeare! I love this one, This is definetly one of my favorites. |
| modern-juliet 2006-05-23 ch 1, | interesting, i never thought about the other side of love before |
| Lovejoy 2005-09-27 ch 1, | This piece intrigued me. A contradicting conflict of emotions that I'm sure we can all agree with. The way you concluded the poem was what stuck out for me though, it tied the whole piece together, good work! |
| techielovn 2005-09-25 ch 1, | I really like what you were saying but putting it as a poem really threw me. Maybe it would be better as in paragraph form, like an essay, i don't know. I liked everything you were thinking, it really relateable. |
| Shasta Valentine 2005-09-23 ch 1, | yeha im pretty much luv you. perfect poem. --shasta valentine |
| Lady Glass 2005-09-20 ch 1, | Woo, I like the way you've put this. It's like trying to scientifically define something so...er...impossible to define. Much love, A-little-bit-blue Lady Glass (sorry I'm not as enthusiastic as usual, I'm just a lil down today...) |
| dooley creel 2005-09-20 ch 1, | The answer to your poem should be an unequivocal, yes. Well, with all things actually, we anylize and fret excessively rather than accept, nonetheless, it is beautifully written, I enjoyed reading it. great work, dc |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-09-20 ch 1, | wow~ i love (no pun intended) the way you wrote this particular poem! so full of feeling and soul~~ i'm putting on fav^^ keep writing! |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-09-20 ch 1, | Maybe love is the quiet insanity that is in us all? At least that is my explination. A wonderful poem, I love they way that you try to make it rational and irrational, love is very confusing when it is looked at too closely. Keep it up. |