It's like a little picture from a big novel was painted in my mind when i read this. This could be a story idea. Well, if you can look at my series that i have up, it's called the blue age. It's a long novel, i have two books. It's not perfect, far from it but it's good, even though it needs work. But check it out and tell me what you think maybe, you'll like it, my diolouge though sucks at points. It's to simple, i was lazy.