| Reviews for Day One |
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RedHairedWriter 10/10/05 . chapter 1I like it, I don't really get it, but It's still, pleasent to read and intreguing. |
Nobody-n-Particular 10/9/05 . chapter 1Powerful realization. |
Pure Autumn 10/3/05 . chapter 1i cant really figure out this poem but i still like the use of language all your poems are so powerful - i wish i could do something just as good- :D |
simpleplan13 9/28/05 . chapter 1this confused me because i cant figure out what you signed... other than that I like it though |
Valentine's Disease 9/24/05 . chapter 1i really like this, tho i dont know what it means to you. |
in theory 9/24/05 . chapter 1This reads like a selection of fancy food at a dinner party; you select the words which you relate to most. Nicely done. |
dooley creel 9/23/05 . chapter 1it must be those midnight cups of coffee, you certainly are prolific. This one is enjoyable, I like, ' part of myself that was living like a barbarian, boudless, until I signed on the dotted line." That's good, the sentiment of the phrase, as well as the choice of words. dc |
GLP 9/23/05 . chapter 1 interesting; i esp. like the last 2 lines. iz x |
bemused scribbler 9/23/05 . chapter 1i like this a lot. The last two lines are really great. nice work. |
backseats on thursdays 9/23/05 . chapter 1psyco-analyzing I guess? lol, awesome work. |
catseyeview 9/22/05 . chapter 1nice again! |
breezy nostrils 9/21/05 . chapter 1Nice! I like how it was so full of meaning...keep on going! |
KwazyKandyPie 9/21/05 . chapter 1very interesitng, i like it! good job on this one. the ending is fantastic.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann- |
lackluster 9/21/05 . chapter 1your poems always have so much meaning. i can read it again and again and discover something new. i really like that. |
poetic abortion 9/21/05 . chapter 1gorgeous. * noelle |