|Reviews for Day One|
| RedHairedWriter 10/10/05 . chapter 1
I like it, I don't really get it, but It's still, pleasent to read and intreguing.
| Nobody-n-Particular 10/9/05 . chapter 1
| Pure Autumn 10/3/05 . chapter 1
i cant really figure out this poem but i still like the use of language all your poems are so powerful - i wish i could do something just as good- :D
| simpleplan13 9/28/05 . chapter 1
this confused me because i cant figure out what you signed... other than that I like it though
| Valentine's Disease 9/24/05 . chapter 1
i really like this, tho i dont know what it means to you.
| in theory 9/24/05 . chapter 1
This reads like a selection of fancy food at a dinner party; you select the words which you relate to most. Nicely done.
| dooley creel 9/23/05 . chapter 1
it must be those midnight cups of coffee, you certainly are prolific. This one is enjoyable, I like, ' part of myself that was living like a barbarian, boudless, until I signed on the dotted line." That's good, the sentiment of the phrase, as well as the choice of words. dc
| GLP 9/23/05 . chapter 1
interesting; i esp. like the last 2 lines. iz x
| bemused scribbler 9/23/05 . chapter 1
i like this a lot. The last two lines are really great. nice work.
| backseats on thursdays 9/23/05 . chapter 1
psyco-analyzing I guess? lol, awesome work.
| catseyeview 9/22/05 . chapter 1
| breezy nostrils 9/21/05 . chapter 1
Nice! I like how it was so full of meaning...keep on going!
| KwazyKandyPie 9/21/05 . chapter 1
very interesitng, i like it! good job on this one. the ending is fantastic.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| lackluster 9/21/05 . chapter 1
your poems always have so much meaning. i can read it again and again and discover something new. i really like that.
| poetic abortion 9/21/05 . chapter 1