before you judge other's poetry harshly maybe you should reconsider your own. you bored me after your fifth line, talk about generic... can you be a little more original??

I love this. Your metaphors are superb. I especially like: "My organs are being scrambled on the road made for car crashes."

o_o

And you said my poem was good... This is excellent.

as always just lovely.

~jess (short review because my thought process has died and now rots in hell)

WO! I was just readin threw your other stuff and then i went back and i was like wo he just wrote that just now. And needless to say Its Fabulous. But you should know seeing as your fabulous in yourself.