Very nice work. I love the style, how it doesn't dwell on either the past or the present, but rather both; isn't that how life is, a careful blend of living in the now and then, thinking of how things were and are and might have been? A touching tale, as well; tragedy is always good for building character.

I loved it. A lot.

I love your writing style. Very good. You're a very talented writer. Keep up the great work!

wonderful. it reminds me of someone i knew actually knew and lost... thanks for putting lost souls in a positive light...

people in love aren't bad... just impressionable.

A.L.V.