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| Onyx 2006-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my. That's heavy, it hit a chord too. |
| ThisCut-UpAngel 2005-09-21 ch 1,  | abuseOh, wow. I really wanted to cry over this. Amazing piece! |
| cling peach 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuse"Those children never used the names writ upon those stones." Wow. That's so heartbreakingly beautiful that it actually brought tears to my eyes. What a horribly sad image. Though this poem had me on the brink of tears, it was absolutely beautiful and you wrote it wonderfully. What a tough subject to write about- good work. Keep writing, you obviously have talent. And I love your pen name. |
| KASoroka 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good, only prob I had with it was that all the breaks seemed unnecessary. Pretty good poem . ^_^ |
| smile persephone 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful yet tragic poem. The style was perfect for the atmosphere and such; it works quite nicely. The imagery is haunting, yet somehow beautiful. I adore the personification of 'daisies/whose upturned faces/cried out/against the blazing sun'. |